I actually have no Idea about how Holland look likes. I don't know much about Holland, but I know some things like the wooden shoes, the windmill, and the tulips...
I have never been there, but I really wish that someday I will be there.
I chose Holland because I was thinking of my grandmother who is of Dutch descent and I remember a small store in Helen Georgia...
My country was colonized by Dutch long time ago. So, no wonder if you might find that some of the words might be the same as Indonesian..
I am sure that this topic is going to be interesting for me and for everyone who is going to read this because we can know more about Holland...^_*
4 comments:
Mery,
Great job in class today! I look forward to having you teach me all about Holland because I've never been there and really don't know much about it. I'm sure you will be a fabulous teacher! I had no idea that the Dutch colonized Indonesia. See... I'm learning already!
I have a few suggestions for you:
In the "About Me" section:
. SO you can (capitals)
. I proud to be (verb)
. just an Ordinary girl (capitals)
. hard to get early (missing a word)
. chat or talking on the phone (keep your verbs parallel)
. You need to make a couple of sentences out of one very long one
. n = and (don't use this abbreviation)
. When I know nothing what to do (this needs to be reworded)
. that's all about I know About My self (3 mistakes)
. "BE THE LIGHT WHEREVER _____ GO.
. IMPACT THE WORLD AS LONG AS ______ LIVE.
. BUT ALLOWS GOD TO WORRY WHAT
. DO... SO,,,,,
Interests:
. (guitar n lil bit keyboard)
. I Love eating (capitals)
. love eating steak (parallel)
. mash potatoes (spelling)
. baked potatoes full loaded (reword)
Let's Blog!!!
. These are some reason
. There are couple
. couple things (choose a better word than "things")
. Have no Idea (capitals)
. how Holland looks like
. know little about Holland
. the windmill
. someday I could be there
. Holland long time
. SO, no wonder (where is your subject?)
Keep up the good work! Watch out for singulars/plurals, capitals, and articles! I hope you are excited to be back from vacation!
Hello there! I always wanted to learn about Holland but never had the opportunity, I am looking forward to learning from you. Great blog so far!
Holland ! hummmmm, yummy, they have really good cheese there! I've been there and really love the architectures, the canals, all the little bridges and the amazing lights for taking pictures. If one day you get a chance to go there, ride a bike like everyone to discover the city, it's a unique experience!
Thank you guys for giving your comments...I really appreciate your comments..^-^
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